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Inside You by ~woundeddragon:iconwoundeddragon:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Your eyes sing to the stars
In shades of amber and
Blue ocean waves
And I am lost inside them

Swallowed by your lips of love
I am safe there
Shielded by your compassionate soul
whose beauty puts the sun set sky
To shame

Hidden in your heart
That melts away the walls
Of insecurity
Whose love can light the shadows
Of the darkness lurking
On the path ahead

And makes each day better
Than all those before it
©2002-2010 ~woundeddragon
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Author's Comments

Just a love poem i wrote for my significant other

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~geocko Aug 8, 2002, 10:38:43 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. i'm normally so cynical so for me to do anything but comment something like "shut up you chliche prat" it is a compliment in itself! but this, this was wonderful. very well written. im sure you'll get a favorite out of someone who doesnt occasional hate love. sometimes i love it but u noe how it is :) (Smile)
~ Geocko / Brian
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~geocko Aug 8, 2002, 10:40:37 PM
screw it, its a favorite!
~ Geocko / Brian
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~ravensaint Aug 8, 2002, 10:49:37 PM
Well done! I hope to have someone love me this way some day...i really like this

Shielded by your compassionate soul
whose beauty puts the sun set sky
To shame

good use of imagery a fav to say the least Thumbs Up

--
RavenSaint
The night is my mistress, and upon her breath I spread my wings...
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~fatelessmirror Aug 9, 2002, 2:22:21 PM

You have affected me in ways I have so far to find out
That which is not yet to be seen
But, we each draw more near
To realization that each movement of our skin
Has made us shudder within
Delving deeper the emotions
Forming love that fills oceans

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!ionlypretend Aug 9, 2002, 6:54:28 PM
arrrghhh. im hating myself for even slightly liking this. i think the first line is the best though. but yes. i do like this. very much. and im hating myself for it. but not too much. HAHA.

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to know
to live
to understand
to love
to hate
to be
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!ionlypretend Aug 9, 2002, 6:56:04 PM
OOPS... sorrY. i read my comment and what i meant by "but not too much" was that im not hating myself too much for liking the poem... i dunno to me it sorta sounded like i was saying i didnt like the poem too much. heh.

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and iONLYpretend:
to know
to live
to understand
to love
to hate
to be
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